Basketball
“Swish” the hoop whispers as I take the high gives my team gives me. I am in my 3rd game in the season and so far we haven’t lost. Today I am feeling my adreniline rush through my body, and as soon as the game started I knew it was my day.
1,2,3 my points are racking up. By the end of the first half I think I had at least 9 points including a three pointer from the outside wing. All of my shot were set shots on the wing or a little next to the wing. “Beep” the buzzer sounds the end of the first half ends great with us winning 27-14.
The second half begins and I am back first shot bounces off the rim and goes in. ” that’s 11″ I say in my head. I dribble down the court pass to the point guard who fakes a shot passes to me then I imediantly shoot and make it. This continues intel I gain 20 points, and “beep” thats the game. With a whooping win of 42-19.
I go to congratulate the other team I know in my head how many points I scored and I will be happy to tell my parents about it.
That sounds like a great game! Almost half the points. Your so good at basketball and I can’t to play with you next season! I love how you could easy slow down and speed up the moments. Good job.
I really like how you wrote this blog post it maid me feel like I was actually at the game.
You really did a good job of putting the reader in your shoes, and showing how u think in your mind when your playing.Good job.
Dear Bryce
I liked that small narrative on basketball and it sounds like you are very good at it, I play football in Australia.
From Rohan
Dear Rohan Leske
Thank you play football here, but I think we are talking about different footballs. I play the American football, but I like soccer too.